The First Revolutionary Story plot with background by MrCynicalwolf, literature
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The First Revolutionary Story plot with background
The world is called Avalon and its the home of the angelic race. Angelic society has progressed to a point, scientific knowledge is actually advance and which has flourished along with magic due to the recent age dubbed as "Utopia." Brought about four thousand years prior to the story by the First Loremaster. Tensions between both science and magic was tenuous at best. One betrayal at the heart of angelic society caused the end of Utopia and sparked a conflict which would rage and continue to grow worse for over twenty years. This becomes the backdrop of the story which takes place within a neutral aligned city called Genesis, during a war wh
The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 2 by MrCynicalwolf, literature
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The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 2
3. Main Characters
Thomas Eolas - The protagonist who displays a cold and strong front to those around him, this is to disguise his true nature, were he is more kind and very protective of those he care about. The reason for his strong front goes back ten years prior to the story, where he was betrayed by his brother, Aaron Eolas.
Jealous of the attention his little brother got and his status as the heir to the Eolas household. Aaron took advantage of Thomas' trust in him and begun to bully him through mind games, this lead to an unstable control of his own magical power, the reason for this is that a clear mind is needed to control magic
The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 1 by MrCynicalwolf, literature
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The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 1
Story Outline
Title: The First Revolutionary
1. Setting
World: Avalon; sharing the same name as the main continent. The native home world of the Angelic race and the first world to build the Stonehenge known as the Eye of the world. This world has a naturally generating magic in the atmosphere, meaning non magical beings can learn to use magic in this world. Inspired by the Island of the dead in Arthurian legend, it is a world believed to be Utopia in other race's stories and legends.
Continent: Avalon; sharing the same name as the world, the land has been plagued in war for over fifteen years. Formally considered a Utopia, which was said
Angel of Knowledge and Time Dialogue by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
Angel of Knowledge and Time Dialogue
Alexandra stood silently behind the Loremaster, she glanced
at him briefly before turning away.
"I see what you are doing. And I can see where it's
heading." she nervously said as the Loremaster turned around.
"At the end of this path you are taking... There is
nothing but pain for you. And for those who care about you. "
"You know I would never put you or those I care for in
harms way. But you know as much as I do, that the future can change,
and I'm determined to change it. Even if it does lead to my death"
"But why you Thomas, why does it have to be you?"
"Who else is there, but me?"
Alexandra looked down and stayed silent for a mom
The Damned Racial Profile by MrCynicalwolf, literature
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The Damned Racial Profile
A name given to those of various races who were brought back
from the dead as mindless slaves. This incurs when a spirit is forcefully put
back into a deceased body, which reactivates brain functions. The process
though making the spirit weak and easy for the caster to control them.
Sometimes the process fails to reactive the brain function of the body,
expelling the spirit once again but remains bound to the necromancer as
spectres.
In Legend its believed that the first form of necromancy
deprived from the corruption of the Lady of the Lake.
Believed to be the same race as the Guardians of the Peak, she became the first
Lich in history. Wagi
Introduction to The Dance of Fate by MrCynicalwolf, literature
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Introduction to The Dance of Fate
"The end of the world. When this matter is brought up there is bound to be discussion of religious catastrophes, meteor collisions and the obvious- human error. But when it came down to those moments in history, we, the humanity, braced for the end... And nothing happened. But something feels different this time...
But let me start from the beginning, from the building of Stonehenge. Despite popular belief, the site has not existed for many thousand years; it was built and organised by three individuals who had an idea: an idea to protect the future of this world from a power which wants to control it. You may know them from the Arthurian le
The First Revolutionary Story plot with background by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
The First Revolutionary Story plot with background
The world is called Avalon and its the home of the angelic race. Angelic society has progressed to a point, scientific knowledge is actually advance and which has flourished along with magic due to the recent age dubbed as "Utopia." Brought about four thousand years prior to the story by the First Loremaster. Tensions between both science and magic was tenuous at best. One betrayal at the heart of angelic society caused the end of Utopia and sparked a conflict which would rage and continue to grow worse for over twenty years. This becomes the backdrop of the story which takes place within a neutral aligned city called Genesis, during a war wh
The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 2 by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 2
3. Main Characters
Thomas Eolas - The protagonist who displays a cold and strong front to those around him, this is to disguise his true nature, were he is more kind and very protective of those he care about. The reason for his strong front goes back ten years prior to the story, where he was betrayed by his brother, Aaron Eolas.
Jealous of the attention his little brother got and his status as the heir to the Eolas household. Aaron took advantage of Thomas' trust in him and begun to bully him through mind games, this lead to an unstable control of his own magical power, the reason for this is that a clear mind is needed to control magic
The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 1 by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
The First Revolutionary - Story Outline Part 1
Story Outline
Title: The First Revolutionary
1. Setting
World: Avalon; sharing the same name as the main continent. The native home world of the Angelic race and the first world to build the Stonehenge known as the Eye of the world. This world has a naturally generating magic in the atmosphere, meaning non magical beings can learn to use magic in this world. Inspired by the Island of the dead in Arthurian legend, it is a world believed to be Utopia in other race's stories and legends.
Continent: Avalon; sharing the same name as the world, the land has been plagued in war for over fifteen years. Formally considered a Utopia, which was said
Angel of Knowledge and Time Dialogue by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
Angel of Knowledge and Time Dialogue
Alexandra stood silently behind the Loremaster, she glanced
at him briefly before turning away.
"I see what you are doing. And I can see where it's
heading." she nervously said as the Loremaster turned around.
"At the end of this path you are taking... There is
nothing but pain for you. And for those who care about you. "
"You know I would never put you or those I care for in
harms way. But you know as much as I do, that the future can change,
and I'm determined to change it. Even if it does lead to my death"
"But why you Thomas, why does it have to be you?"
"Who else is there, but me?"
Alexandra looked down and stayed silent for a mom
The Damned Racial Profile by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
The Damned Racial Profile
A name given to those of various races who were brought back
from the dead as mindless slaves. This incurs when a spirit is forcefully put
back into a deceased body, which reactivates brain functions. The process
though making the spirit weak and easy for the caster to control them.
Sometimes the process fails to reactive the brain function of the body,
expelling the spirit once again but remains bound to the necromancer as
spectres.
In Legend its believed that the first form of necromancy
deprived from the corruption of the Lady of the Lake.
Believed to be the same race as the Guardians of the Peak, she became the first
Lich in history. Wagi
Introduction to The Dance of Fate by MrCynicalwolf, literature
Literature
Introduction to The Dance of Fate
"The end of the world. When this matter is brought up there is bound to be discussion of religious catastrophes, meteor collisions and the obvious- human error. But when it came down to those moments in history, we, the humanity, braced for the end... And nothing happened. But something feels different this time...
But let me start from the beginning, from the building of Stonehenge. Despite popular belief, the site has not existed for many thousand years; it was built and organised by three individuals who had an idea: an idea to protect the future of this world from a power which wants to control it. You may know them from the Arthurian le
The Duskfall Chronicles - Prologue (Edited) by Finblade, literature
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The Duskfall Chronicles - Prologue (Edited)
The woman was running in a dark forest. She was quite tall and had a long blonde hair, and her eyes were blue like the sky during a winter morning. Her face had an unexpectable harshness in them, but generally the men considered her to be quite beautiful. She was wearing white robes which were stained, and which had the emblem of the inquisiton on its back; A golden sword behind a shield, and a gold-red sun behind the sigil. The night was cold and rainy, and bolts of thunder painted the world with flashes of white light. The sky to the east was coloured red, and thick smoke rose from that direction. The woman heard a beastly roar from the vil
Found some notes that belong to the Damned profile. Thought I'll share there if anybody is interested. Tad more lore tip-bits.
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If the Lady of the Lake is indeed of the same race as the Guardians. It shows that they aren't at all incorruptible despite popular belief. This will also strengthen the idea she maybe still alive as the Guardians are immortal.
The Last conflict involving undead on a large scale was known as the Shattering of Light and Dark. Where the order of the Lightbringers(inspired by templers) clashed against the Damned lead by the Lady of the Lake. The resulting conflict turned Tartraus in the land it has become too toda